Portfolio Task Corrected

How to plan the perfect party

Very often teenagers organize parties, sometimes a party can be succesfull, sometimes not. Parties are not succesfull for different reasons, like not inviting enough people, the place very boring, bad music, etc. The type of parties I like is the ones with good music, so I don't get dismotivated. In parties, it  is important to consider different aspects, so they are not a fail. There are solutions for this, like:

- To choose good music

- Invite the right people

- Good food

- A huge place, enough so you can dance.

Consider this if you want to organize a good party, so you and your friends have a good time by dancing, talking or other things.

Nº of words: 119

"¡Surprise!"

Last year, it happened an unforgettable day. It was my friend Vladimir birthday's, February 29th. It is a very special day, but his parents always have to travel, so he only celebrate it with his uncles. But last year, their parents had to travel again, but since they never are in home, they cancelled that trip so they can pass time with his son, and next to it, they invited me to celebrate it. While Vladimir was sleeping, we prepared all things. And when Vladimir waked up, we came out of a closet and shouted "¡Surprise!" and he jumped of hapiness and then we celebrated with games, stories, etc, and we had a very good time, and his parents thank me for helping to organize the things, and for join them for the celebration, and for last it was time for the presents.   

Nº of words:  131

Portfolio Tasks Corrected

Travel to USA

When I was a little kid, I went to Europe to many countries,Germany, France, etc. After that, it was time to  travel to USA. It was rare comming back to America after long time. In there, we met a good friend of my parents, who helped us as a guide through the country. We stayed in a building, and we rent a big car, since we were 6 people. We visited Disney Land, in which we went to different games, and had a lot of fun. My impresions of USA is that you must visit it, because you can buy stuff cheaper, there are beautiful places, and many other things. We want to visit USA again soon by next year, in which we would remember good times.

Nº of Words:  141 words

My Common Mistakes Glossary Part 2

Mistake Nº4: "Magasin"

Correction: " Magazine"

Grammar rule: Spelling

Explanation of the grammar rule:

Correct spelling	Spelling advice	Common misspelling
accommodate, accommodation	two cs, two ms	accomodate, accomodation
achieve	i before e	acheive
across	one c	accross
aggressive, aggression	two gs	agressive, agression
apparently	-ent not -ant	apparantly
appearance	ends with -ance	appearence
argument	no e after the u	arguement
assassination	two double s’s	assasination
basically	ends with -ally	basicly
beginning	double n before the -ing	begining
believe	i before e	beleive, belive
bizarre	one z, double -r	bizzare
business	begins with busi-	buisness
calendar	-ar not -er	calender
Caribbean	one r, two bs	Carribean
cemetery	ends with -ery	cemetary
chauffeur	ends with -eur	chauffer
colleague	-ea- in the middle	collegue
coming	one m	comming
committee	double m, double t, double e	commitee
completely	ends with -ely	completly
conscious	-sc- in the middle	concious
curiosity	-os- in the middle	curiousity
definitely	-ite- not –ate-	definately
dilemma	-mm- not -mn-	dilemna
disappear	one s, two ps	dissapear
disappoint	one s, two ps	dissapoint
ecstasy	ends with –sy	ecstacy
embarrass	two rs, two s’s	embarass
environment	n before the m	enviroment
existence	ends with -ence	existance
Fahrenheit	begins with Fahr-	Farenheit
familiar	ends with -iar	familar
finally	two ls	finaly
fluorescent	begins with fluor-	florescent
foreign	e before i	foriegn
foreseeable	begins with fore-	forseeable
forty	begins with for-	fourty
forward	begins with for-	foward
friend	i before e	freind
further	begins with fur-	futher
gist	begins with g-	jist
glamorous	-mor- in the middle	glamourous
government	n before the m	goverment
guard	begins with gua-	gaurd
happened	ends with -ened	happend
harass, harassment	one r, two s’s	harrass, harrassment
honorary	-nor- in the middle	honourary
humorous	-mor- in the middle	humourous
idiosyncrasy	ends with -asy	idiosyncracy
immediately	ends with -ely	immediatly
incidentally	ends with -ally	incidently
independent	ends with -ent	independant
interrupt	two rs	interupt
irresistible	ends with -ible	irresistable
knowledge	remember the d	knowlege
liaise, liaison	remember the second i: liais-	liase, liason
lollipop	i in the middle	lollypop
millennium, millennia	double l, double n	millenium, millenia
Neanderthal	ends with -thal	Neandertal
necessary	one c, two s’s	neccessary
noticeable	remember the middle e	noticable
occasion	two cs, one s	ocassion, occassion
occurred, occurring	two cs, two rs	occured, occuring
occurrence	two cs, two rs, -ence not -ance	occurance, occurence
pavilion	one l	pavillion
persistent	ends with -ent	persistant
pharaoh	ends with -aoh	pharoah
piece	i before e	peice
politician	ends with -cian	politican
Portuguese	ends with –guese	Portugese
possession	two s’s in the middle and two at the end	posession
preferred, preferring	two rs	prefered, prefering
propaganda	begins with propa-	propoganda
publicly	ends with –cly	publically
really	two ls	realy
receive	e before i	recieve
referred, referring	two rs	refered, refering
religious	ends with -gious	religous
remember	-mem- in the middle	rember, remeber
resistance	ends with -ance	resistence
sense	ends with -se	sence
separate	-par- in the middle	seperate
siege	i before e	seige
successful	two cs, two s’s	succesful
supersede	ends with -sede	supercede
surprise	begins with sur-	suprise
tattoo	two ts, two os	tatoo
tendency	ends with -ency	tendancy
therefore	ends with -fore	therefor
threshold	one h in the middle	threshhold
tomorrow	one m, two rs	tommorow, tommorrow
tongue	begins with ton-, ends with -gue	tounge
truly	no e	truely
unforeseen	remember the e after the r	unforseen
unfortunately	ends with -ely	unfortunatly
until	one l at the end	untill
weird	e before i	wierd
wherever	one e in the middle	whereever
which	begins with wh-	wich

 Extracted from http://oxforddictionaries.com/words/common-misspellings

Examples:

1.- My birthday is in Wednesday

2.- Today I'm going to receive a package from England.

Links to practice:

1.- http://www.funenglishgames.com/spellinggames/learntospell.html

2.- http://eslus.com/LESSONS/SPELL/SPELL11.HTM

Mistake Nº5: "These past winter vacation"

Correction: "These past winter vacations"

Grammar rule: Plurals

Explanation of the grammar rule:

For most nouns, just add -s			For nouns ending in s, x, z, ch or sh, add -es
Singular	Plural		Singular	Plural
hand	hands		box	boxes
rabbit	rabbits		pitch	pitches
key	keys		wish	wishes
clock	clocks		boss	bosses
football	footballs		buzz	buzzes
door	doors		glass	glasses

Extracted from http://firstschoolyears.com/literacy/word/other/plurals/resources/rules.htm
Examples:

1.- I can't find the keys

2.- There are a lot of boxes with old stuff.

Links to practice:

1.- http://www.myenglishpages.com/site_php_files/grammar-exercise-plural.php

2.- http://www.better-english.com/easier/plurals.htm