Clothes Written Task Corrected

First of all, it is not a singer, it is a group of electro-music composer, called Monstercat Media. It is composed by lots of artists, like Pegboard Nerds, Droptek, Tut-tut child, etc. I started listening to only one song and no I have more than 10 songs. Their songs are really great, when I listen to them, I have the feeling that I'm in a party dancing, it is really great. Their songs mix lots of sounds, creating a really good song.

Their plans for the future are keeping their songs, and their concerts all over the world. Now, in this moment they have fans everywhere, and nowadays they have a webpage in which we can buy online stuff from real artists, who were with their clothes; in a few words, accessories, all of this is really cool stuff.

Nº of words: 138

Future Task Corrected

Future, wait for us!

Technology in last years has progessed in an incredible way. Surely we have imagined how it will be in 1 or 2 years more, but how technology will be in 2033? Imagine us in that year, how we are going to be related to our physical condition, our family, the only thing is missing is robotical mascots, could you imagine it?

One of the things I wonder is how schools will be in 2033., Nowadays,m we can work with I-pads, Macs, etc. I think schools are going to be optional, thanks to robotical teachers that will teach us in our houses.

And the most important, mankind. In my opinion, in that year we will be succesfully cloned, we are going to be inmune to illnesses and we will be incredible smart; getting back to technology, I think  teletransportation will be available to use, as well as the new generation of I-phones.

So let's prepare ourselves, so we can understand things later.

N° of words: 166

Trinity Tasks Correction N°2

October 5th, 2013,

Yesterday was my lucky day, a message of god! I was walking in my street to the fast-food shop, and suddenly I saw a strange sheet of paper and I realized that it was a $100 dollar bill. I couldn't believe it! So in that moment I stayed calm and I came back to my house. I want to wait for the GTA 5 special edition to arrive in the US, so with this money I will surely buy it with no problem. and if I have some extra money , I can go to a premier movie, and see it in 3D with some friends. Surely, we will have fun! But the problem is when my parents or someone else will ask me about the money, then I will be in big trouble.

(Number of words: 135)

Trinity Tasks Correction Nº1

Allsop School

As it said in the text, Allsop School was one of the worst schools, but thanks to the headteacher, it changed a lot. Now the students "stands in line waiting for teachers to lead them into classroms, they wear grey and red jackets, ties and pullovers".

 They also have to wear the right uniform, keep their hair in good conditions and not using mobile phone in class, otherwise the teacher will send them back to their houses. They "can't go to fast-food shops and if they don't do their homework they have to stay in school".

Not to mention the student's behaviour and the buildings before the teacher's arrival. I think that the changes made in the school were very effective and a good idea from the teacher, because the students have to know how to behave and take care of their appearance, so in the future  they will remember everything learned and they will put it to work.

 (Number of words: 159)

Link to Google Docs Trinity Tasks

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Portfolio Task Corrected

How to plan the perfect party

Very often teenagers organize parties, sometimes a party can be succesfull, sometimes not. Parties are not succesfull for different reasons, like not inviting enough people, the place very boring, bad music, etc. The type of parties I like is the ones with good music, so I don't get dismotivated. In parties, it  is important to consider different aspects, so they are not a fail. There are solutions for this, like:

- To choose good music

- Invite the right people

- Good food

- A huge place, enough so you can dance.

Consider this if you want to organize a good party, so you and your friends have a good time by dancing, talking or other things.

Nº of words: 119

"¡Surprise!"

Last year, it happened an unforgettable day. It was my friend Vladimir birthday's, February 29th. It is a very special day, but his parents always have to travel, so he only celebrate it with his uncles. But last year, their parents had to travel again, but since they never are in home, they cancelled that trip so they can pass time with his son, and next to it, they invited me to celebrate it. While Vladimir was sleeping, we prepared all things. And when Vladimir waked up, we came out of a closet and shouted "¡Surprise!" and he jumped of hapiness and then we celebrated with games, stories, etc, and we had a very good time, and his parents thank me for helping to organize the things, and for join them for the celebration, and for last it was time for the presents.   

Nº of words:  131